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The dialog of philosophy focuses on logic, rules of argumentation, and the definition of abstract concepts. but Science is a strategy for arriving at consensus answers to questions about the natural world. It focuses on discovering "facts", "laws", and "mechanisms".
whenever time change rapidly, we should not be restrained by the meaning of the traditional way. because philosophy provided the source of answering with science which yielded lots of outcomes by the benefit of the one.
Philosophy of mind and the scientific study of consciousness are two fields that are interacting closely on an unresolved issue and present an interesting history of how philosophy and science work together.
Furthermore, the fusion between philosophy and science has a positive effect on our the nature of knowledge. and this situation will improve the development of society including physical and psychical mature.